Taxi Trouble
TAXI RIDE- SARAH is calling a taxi as she is going to go out with friends for the weekend. She asks the taxi company to come right away to her house. After getting changed she heard a knock on the door. It was the taxi driver. The taxi driver had a scare across his top cheek. He had a frightening expiration on his face the one you would be horrified to see. SARAH then stroll to the
SARAH:
Can you take me to Catford Station?
The taxi driver nodded his head; Sarah went into the car but with an odd look
Sarah
Erm.... how much do I need to pay you?
Taxi driver
NOTHING
HE HAD THIS GROWLING, DEEP VOICE AS IF HE HATED EVERYTHING IN THIS WORLD.
SARAH WAS SHOCKED AND CONFUSED WHY WOULDNT HE TAKE HER MONEY?
SARAH:
EXCUSE ME THIS IS NOT CATFORD STAION WERE YOU TAKING ME?
THE WAS SILENCE!
SARAH:
WERE YOU TAKING ME? LOUDER NOW
THE TAXI DRIVERS LOCKS THE DOORS THEY IS NO WAY OUT NOW!
SARAH: AHHHHHHHHHHHHH! SOMEBODY HELP ME AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!
(I have not finished my script but i will try and do better in the future)
Mulki
ReplyDeleteThis is a pass so far. You have used some of the conventions a of a professional script such as the correct font and writing the names and action correctly.
However, part of the reason you need to format a script properly is so that it is easy to read for an actor or a director .It is difficult to see the difference between the action and dialogue.
Also make sure you avoid using capitals in the dialogue. Reserve them for names
Mr Monahan