Thanks for uploading this - great example of ducking
Merit To improve this you could remove some of the mistakes in the dialogue. There are some moments where she pauses a little and you could cut those out.
I like how you have dropped the volume when she speaks and then raise it when she finishes. You could also cut the music short at the end - it goes on or quite a while.
Thanks for uploading this - great example of ducking
ReplyDeleteMerit
To improve this you could remove some of the mistakes in the dialogue. There are some moments where she pauses a little and you could cut those out.
I like how you have dropped the volume when she speaks and then raise it when she finishes. You could also cut the music short at the end - it goes on or quite a while.
MR Monahan